Ike

Hey please tell me what you think of this song. What do you think of the mix and the pan. Any idea's on the EQ? I know the drum track sort of sucks... I'm not a very good at drums. I think I might have my friend redo those. So don't really worry about commenting on them.

Any suggestions for the name would be appreciated too. So far I'm between With Me, Close Your Eyes, Don't Be Afraid and Victorian. Other suggestions would be good too.

Thanks a lot for all your help both now and in the past.

Isaac Sloan

Everything I ever wanted.
I guess that I've got it now
Everything I ever wanted
It don't matter to me some how

[chorus]
Read me a book where the hero doesn't die
Take me anywhere tell me I can fly away
Find me someone who can tell me why
We say we're fighting for peace but it seem like a lie to me

I guess JT brought sexy back
But I haven't seen much change
Music with soul is under attack
Why don't you find that strange?

When I looked out my window today
The grass turned brown and the sun went away
Turned my head to the wall and prayed
I guess you were right in what you say

[chorus]

Tell me its not a joke
Tell me you feel it too
You laugh are you lauging at me
I'd won't laugh at you
Tell me its not a joke
Tell me you feel it too
I hate that everythings broken
I know that you hate it too

[chorus]

A song about all the things we desire but are afraid to try for. A song about the people who feel like no one loves them because they choose to ignore the people who obviously do. This song is about you and me. Probably the most Dylanesque song I've ever recorded. Tell me what you think.

Thanks,

Isaac Sloan

Song about society. Song about a girl. I believe all songs are basically about a girl. Well maybe not space odessy. Wait yeah that was about a girl too. Oh well. Basically its a social protest song though. Tell me what you think. Please especially comment on the vocals and lyrics.

I think this is the best recording I have ever made. Maybe not the best song but the best recording. Please tell me what you think. If you would please comment on the levels, the melody, my vocals, and the lyrics.
Thank you,
Ike